Wow! The reviewer actually makes a valid point!

He is right - in the section on the Neuroreductionist Objection quoted below I should have cited only Dennett and O'Regan, not Pessoa et al.

A number of theorists have proposed (Dennett 1991, 1992, O'Regan 1992, Pessoa et al. 1998) that consciousness is an illusion, and that in fact the conscious experience is considerably more impoverished than it appears subjectively.