"does not offer the readers of this journal a complete model or a novel approach to modeling."

I can't believe the ignorance of these guys! Not a novel approach to modeling? How can he not see it? Who are these guys? Where do they find them?

More significantly, how come they are allowed to make statements like this without any accountability? When this paper finally gets the recognition it deserves, who will come back and track these guys down and challenge them for holding up publication?